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Part:19

Last kill...


<10:50 PM>
<January 22nd>
<Thursady>
<Lunetta town>
<Allyway>

Jimmy's POV

            I had a dark smile on my face as I chaced a thug that hurted my brother into a allyway.My smile grew larger I neared him.I dragged my blood stained blade across the wall."Want to know my secret?",I asked in my demonic voice."NO!Just leave me alone man!",the thug yelled."You sure?",I asked walking closer to him."Want your secret?",He asked.His voice dripping in fear and hope."Hehe!",I giggled.Then I got to him.I raised my knife to his throat.Then screamed at the top of my lungs,"STAB!STAB!STAB!" while stabing him to death.My knife my was now dripping in blood.
            I smiled at the though of my brother accepting me if I killed someone that I killed.As I collected the money from the body.Then I heard something I didn't want to hear.Sirens of cops cars coming.I could hear the sirens getting louder.So I made my run for it trying to claim the fence as fast as I can.
            I looked behide me and saw the cop cars."Oh crap!",I mumbled under my breath as I claimed faster."STOP RIGHT THERE KILLER",one of the cops yelled."No!",I yelled.I was at the top of the fence about to jump off..

~BANG!!~
    ~BANG!!~
        ~BANG!!~

          I was shot!I fell off the fence.The cops looked throw the fence.I layed on the ground not making a move so they would think im dead or something."He dead.We'll collect him soon."one stated.As they drove off.I tried to stand.I felt my bood pouring from my stomach.I covered it with my hand as blood gushed out.I was shot three times so I was bleeding pretty badly.
what going to happen next
also if the cops would think he dead just because he is laying on the ground that be a good why to get out of jail. :I
Idk what happen all I know is that I stayed up all night working on these
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sora67099 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
me:w00t! that he killed the bad guy.
me when jimmy got shot: ._.
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (in my mind)
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GnadeDragonArts Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
indeed
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sora67099 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ROCK ONRock On I Ain't Got Time For This Jordan Emoticon but in real life you shocked me in the last 3 you made this a good story
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GnadeDragonArts Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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sora67099 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
no prob
:) (Smile) 
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GnadeDragonArts Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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sora67099 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
hey i'm thinking of doing minecraft art like finn in minecraft is that a good idea?
:? (Confused) 
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GnadeDragonArts Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you should
half of my characters are minecratia
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Poison223 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
JIMMMY!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Komari Kamikita (Crying) [V5] 
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GnadeDragonArts Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed
Also for tommarrow you made want a box of tissues for part 20
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